-- Liverpool Winger/Left Back --

about me

Name: Tan Jun Yang (remember this.)
Age:15
From:Singapore
Job: Annoying shits, Amusing non-shits.

Am not going to put a retarded bio.

Thursday, September 21, 2006

wow this ticked me off cause joseph and nick dared spout shit about rap having only complete rhymes for endings of a line and dared mock me and tease me for something they got incorrectly

rap is not only about rhyme, in fact its about assonance most of the time, for those of ignorance.

english is too limited a language, to only be limited to rhymes

here's some examples to enlighten nick and joseph

Lose Yourself, by eminem

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgettin
What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out

sweaty and heavy, that is a rhyme but isn't a complete one

already, spaghetti, dy and ti are assonances, they don't come out the exactly the sameway, but the "ee" sound is good enough to make its visceral

nervous, surface, the sound "urs" is the assonance

drop bombs, the sound of "op" and "omb" is assonance

on, forgettin, "on" and "tin" is assonance

wrote down, whole crowd, so loud, come out. the "o" in the words as well as "crowd, loud out' ain't rhymes, but assonance

see? its not about stringing complete rhymes,
likewise, in "nick" and "shit", the "it-ic" is the assonance

Another example

jay z/linkin part - numb/encore

Can I get a encore? Do you want more?
Cookin’ raw with the Brooklyn boy
So, for one last time, I need y’all to roar

"core and more" are rhymes, but "raw" is an assonance

"cookin" and "brooklyn" aren't complete rhymes

"y'all" and "roar", theres an assonance of "all-oar"

See? End of story

silverletal [Simple and Clean] 2:00 AM

Learn to Kid
Listen up, you
This is the special one
Please, don't try to spew
Shit, and spoil all this fun.
Go back to school

And learn to play, kid
Be a fool
Not, a boring dick

I am a flamer.
Someone nasty.
I'm a burner
A very big baddie,
But please don't cry

The more you do, the more I
Wanna die
Wanna say goodbye
This too fast for you?
Can't keep up,

Can't catch up
Get ready
Buckle up, and follow

The great one, he will
Lead you outta this shitty sorrow
He'll teach you how to.
Play.
And you will learn to.

Say
Some nice words
To your next-door girl
Make her hurt(sies)
And unfurl

The naughty within
Rip it from hiding
Its time to unleash
The evil seed
in your soul

Learn to kid
Learn it from the kid
He's tops!
He's hot!
He rocks!

You're not!
And when the girls come!
They go,"
Oh!
Yuck!

You suck!
Liar, liar
Set you on fire
Crier, crier
Yawn. Whatever